Friday, November 16, 2012
What Do You Want?
This question is the beginning of dramatic possibility.
As a writer, I spend a lot of time thinking about this from all of my characters' perspective.
✬ What do they want?
✬ Who or what is stopping them from getting what they want?
✬ How can I make what they want mean everything to them - and to the reader?
✬ How can I make their struggle to get what they want as interesting as possible?
✬ What can I do to break a character's heart?
Or as Mr. Vonnegut put it, "Be a sadist. No matter how sweet and innocent your leading characters, make awful things happen to them in order that the reader may see what they are made of."
Triple bingo, Kurt.
I especially like how David Mamet* put it:
QUESTION:WHAT IS DRAMA?
DRAMA, AGAIN, IS THE QUEST OF THE HERO TO OVERCOME THOSE THINGS WHICH PREVENT HIM FROM ACHIEVING A SPECIFIC, ACUTE GOAL.
SO: WE, THE WRITERS, MUST ASK OURSELVES OF EVERY SCENE THESE THREE QUESTIONS.
1) WHO WANTS WHAT?
2) WHAT HAPPENS IF SHE DOESN'T GET IT?
3) WHY NOW?
(*If you read the whole story, which you should, be forewarned that Mamet is a bit of a potty mouth.)
And I ran into this the other day, in a photograph at the Orem Public Library of all places:
1. I WANT...
2. BUT...
3. SO I...
Take it away, Leonardo: Simplicity is the ultimate sophistication. Leonardo DaVinci
So before beginning any story, long or short, I first ask myself these questions on behalf of all my story critical characters. Over and over and over.
Once they refuse to let me change their answers, I know we're ready to go to work.
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I loved your Vonegut quote-every time anything bad happens in something I write, I'm called a terrible person by my friends. I'm glad to know that I'm not alone. Just discovered this blog after the article in the Daily Herald. I'll try to keep following for your awesome tips and ideas!
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